Today, my oldest child said, “Time is going really fast lately!” It is, sweetie. It is.
We’re already up to the third week in January. My youngest child is now eight months old. The girls started at a new dance school and are settling into their new schedules. LIFE, MAN.
Today’s snippet picks up right where last week’s left off, with Lydia arriving at her new home on a cold, wet evening.
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Charlotte had prepared herself for a heavy Scottish brogue, but the old woman’s accent was more Cheshire than anything.
“Um, Mrs. Faraday?”
The woman tilted her head to one side, but gave no indication that she might be the Mrs. Faraday in question.
Charlotte cleared her throat and began again. “I’m looking for a Mrs. Harriet Faraday. My name is Charlotte Claridge. I am your… Well, her niece.”
The other woman drew in a breath and held onto it as she took in every detail of Charlotte’s appearance from head to toe. “Wipe your boots,” she said after a full minute had passed, and stepped aside to let Charlotte enter.
“Wipe your boots.” I love random comments like that. It always makes me wonder what the person is really thinking. Great snippet. 🙂
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Oh ho, enigmatic to the core. Great snippet, Quen. 🙂
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She doesn’t seem very welcoming.
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Well,at least she didn’t tell her to get lost, which is good, I guess?
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I enjoyed the realistic details!
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Interesting snippet!
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I love the simple yet complexity of this greeting. It reveals much without and fanfare, rather like her aunt. Great introduction, Quen!
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I suppose this is a promising response, though the aunt isn’t exactly overjoyed.
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The aunt reminds me of Marilla Cuthbert in Anne of Green Gables.No emotion on the outside. “Wipe your boots,” is exactly what Marilla would’ve said.
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Doesn’t seem to be off to a good start.
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Haha, right to the point. I get the idea that she’ll be a handful for Charlotte. 😉
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I am so intrigued by this aunt! Nicely done–piquing the readers’ curiosity with a few, well-chosen words.
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Awesome snippet, Quen. Great characterisation.
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I suppose it’s better than slamming the door in her face!
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So much for a warm welcome if that is her! I guess it could have been worse.
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